‘Have a great time,’ Danny said as he dropped me
on a blind date he set me up on, even after my plea
that I want to remain lonely and single all my life.
What harm would it do, if I died without a wife?
But he wanted to prove that he was a real friend
and did want to see me walk to a bitter end
of having experienced my whole life without love.
So he set me on the date I just mentioned above.
I walked into the coffee house where I was to wait
for a girl who Danny thought could be my soul mate.
I ordered some coffee, so that it wouldn’t be weird
if it was actually a practical joke by my friend, like I feared.
But it wasn’t a prank, and now I wish it was.
Just keep reading, you will know the cause.
With a hat made of feathers from some bird, possibly crow,
my date looked like a psychic from some old-school folk lore.
Black were her nails and black was her dress.
Black was her hair that was in a complete mess.
She walked straight to me without having to wait.
How did she know who I was? – It was a blind date.
She looked at me and smiled, but didn’t say a word.
For quite a while, only my coffee sips were heard.
I soon finished my coffee and slowly put the cup down.
She quickly took the utensil and looked inside with a frown.
‘You don’t have to worry,’ I said. ‘I can order some more,’
But it wasn’t the lack of coffee that was making her sore.
She tilted the cup a little, then twirled it around.
And then all of sudden made an exasperated sound.
‘It won’t work between us,’ she said. ‘I can already see.
It’s written all clear, in your now finished coffee.’
And just as suddenly, she got up and left.
Leaving me in a shock and awkwardly bereft.
Red faced and embarrassed, I left as people stared
with looks of pity, for which I was completely unprepared.
It is safe to assume, that I drink coffee no more,
and Danny that night, was black-eyed and sore.
Poor Danny!
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Oh Danny..
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I was hooked when I was reading this. You write really well! Kudos. 🙂
Now I shall stalk the rest of your posts.
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I like when the tables turn.
(Actually, I am really uncomfortable when I get stalked, but I try not to complain. I have learnt to “Just smile and wave”)
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The unexpected is always thrilling.
And now he quotes Madagascar. You’re a keeper, boy. Or girl. I’m still not sure.
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If you’re not sure, I won’t spoil the mystery. 😉
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Ok these kind of mysteries suck. So reveal. 😛
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*drum roll*
I am….
*some more drum roll*
a…
*a little more drum roll*
…boy! 😛
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How so dramatic! Why are you not an actor yet? 😛
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Surprise, surprise.
I have done theater for three years. Have taken a hiatus now, though.
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Bollywood is probably waiting for you right now.
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Bollywood? No thank you. I’d rather hit Broadway. Stage is an exhilarating place to be.
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True. Good luck.
I hope theananymoustalker finally gets noticed!
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I hope theanonymoustalker stays hidden while my real self gets noticed! 😛
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Well done! (on the post). Sorry about the date!
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Hey! I wrote about a blind date as well! Too coincidental! (Dang!)
Loved the rhymes and the rhythm, and the language and the descriptions, and that brilliant ending! (Sorry about the run-on sentences!)
“Black-eyed and sore” indeed! Poor Danny!
You are a fabulous writer!
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Oh, and here’s mine:
http://magicsurrealist2013.me/2015/09/18/the-blind-date-and-the-cup-of-coffee/
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This is an especially special piece by an especially special storyteller!
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Wow…Just Wow! More than you, I feel bad for Danny’s plight! Poor thing with a sore black eye! hahahaha….!
I love your work, you are an amazing writer!
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Wow…That was amazing,I love your posts more and more by the day…You are no doubt an amazing writer!!
And what was Danny thinking..your soulmate?!..If you ask me,he deserved the black eye 😛
Throwback…Good thing,your break up with writer’s block….LOL
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Finally! Someone who thinks Danny deserved it! 😀
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Well,he did!…..LOL 😛
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And he writes poems too.. Really interesting piece
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It took me until the fifth stanza to realize this was a poem and not a story. 😛 I guess I have become a little rhythm-blind. Nice one, though!
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My poetry reads like a prose? I will take that as a compliment.
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No. The poem read like a poem of course, but it took me awhile to realize that. Must be all the prose that I read for W101 lately. 😀
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I took that as a compliment already. You can’t take it back now. 😛
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Haha. If it pleases you, then of course it was meant at as compliment!
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The only think I’ve ever seen at the bottom of a teacup are the stains I’d be scrubbing off my teeth later.
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That should be “thing.” Too much morning, not enough coffee.
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Haha, I loved this! Good one. 😀
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Lovely and dramatic.
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